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2019年11月22日 00:17

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【说】【泪】【”】【是】【一】【个】【议】【论】【文】【的】【题】【目】【,】【而】【本】【文】【的】【内】【容】【主】【要】【是】【写】【自】【己】【克】【服】【了】【爱】【流】【泪】【的】【习】【惯】【而】【变】【得】【坚】【强】【的】【事】【,】【这】【样】【,】【文】【章】【的】【标】【题】【和】【内】【容】【就】【不】【完】【全】【切】【合】【了】【。】【文】【中】【第】【四】【段】【所】【讲】【的】【就】【符】【合】【“】【说】【泪】【”】【这】【个】【题】【目】【,】【但】【从】【整】【篇】【的】【角】【度】【来】【看】【,】【它】【和】【叙】【述】【的】【事】【情】【是】【不】【协】【调】【的】【。】【这】【个】【毛】【病】【的】【产】【生】【就】【和】【文】【题】【有】【关】【系】【。】【题】【目】【还】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【好】【,】【是】【否】【可】【以】【把】【原】【题】【改】【为】【“】【我】【不】【再】【流】【泪】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【喜】【欢】【流】【泪】【到】【流】【血】【流】【汗】【也】【不】【流】【泪】【,】【思】【想】【上】【发】【生】【这】【一】【巨】【变】【,】【似】【乎】【主】【要】【是】【从】【梅】【花】【身】【上】【得】【到】【感】【悟】【而】【来】【,】【想】【学】【习】【它】【的】【坚】【强】【。】【但】【让】【人】【怀】【疑】【的】【是】【,】【就】【凭】【这】【一】【点】【,】【能】【促】【成】【这】【么】【大】【的】【转】【变】【吗】【?】【这】【里】【存】【在】【一】【个】【文】【章】【真】【实】【性】【的】【问】【题】【,】【是】【凭】【主】【观】【想】【象】【去】【写】【,】【还】【是】【从】【生】【活】【实】【际】【出】【发】【?】【是】【表】【现】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【还】【是】【矫】【情】【做】【作】【?】【这】【是】【我】【们】【在】【开】【始】【学】【习】【写】【作】【时】【不】【能】【不】【认】【真】【考】【虑】【的】【。】【对】【于】【初】【学】【写】【作】【者】【来】【说】【,】【应】【努】【力】【做】【到】【“】【以】【我】【手】【写】【我】【心】【”】【“】【表】【现】【真】【实】【的】【自】【我】【”】【。】【写】【作】【离】【不】【开】【想】【象】【,】【但】【即】【使】【想】【象】【也】【不】【能】【脱】【离】【生】【活】【的】【真】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【全】【文】【在】【逻】【辑】【上】【还】【存】【在】【问】【题】【。】【人】【的】【情】【感】【世】【界】【是】【复】【杂】【的】【,】【流】【泪】【哭】【泣】【毕】【竟】【是】【一】【种】【正】【常】【的】【情】【感】【宣】【泄】【。】【对】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【子】【来】【说】【,】【流】【泪】【未】【必】【就】【是】【软】【弱】【,】【而】【不】【流】【泪】【却】【可】【能】【是】【一】【种】【“】【伪】【坚】【强】【”】【。】【另】【外】【,】【作】【者】【喜】【欢】【梅】【花】【,】【是】【因】【为】【它】【“】【花】【瓣】【上】【没】【有】【泪】【痕】【”】【,】【那】【么】【,】【其】【他】【的】【花】【,】【诸】【如】【桃】【花】【、】【李】【花】【的】【花】【瓣】【上】【就】【有】【泪】【痕】【吗】【?】【可】【见】【这】【样】【写】【是】【不】【合】【乎】【逻】【辑】【的】【。】【如】【果】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【在】【逻】【辑】【上】【站】【不】【住】【,】【它】【便】【是】【一】【篇】【失】【败】【之】【作】【,】【就】【像】【做】【数】【学】【题】【,】【推】【理】【错】【了】【,】【这】【道】【题】【就】【做】【错】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【出】【现】【这】【些】【问】【题】【,】【也】【不】【足】【为】【奇】【,】【因】【为】【毕】【竟】【出】【自】【一】【名】【初】【一】【学】【生】【之】【手】【。】【想】【要】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【先】【要】【从】【方】【方】【面】【面】【把】【写】【的】【问】【题】【想】【清】【楚】【、】【想】【透】【彻】【,】【如】【果】【思】【想】【上】【还】【很】【模】【糊】【,】【自】【己】【都】【感】【到】【说】【不】【通】【,】【这】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【东】【西】【就】【会】【像】【是】【一】【锅】【夹】【生】【饭】【,】【让】【人】【难】【以】【下】【咽】【。】【学】【习】【写】【作】【要】【从】【提】【高】【思】【想】【认】【识】【水】【平】【、】【丰】【富】【情】【感】【世】【界】【入】【手】【。】【技】【巧】【是】【要】【学】【的】【,】【但】【并】【不】【是】【第】【一】【位】【的】【,】【千】【万】【不】【能】【本】【末】【倒】【置】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【语】【言】【上】【的】【问】【题】【主】【要】【有】【两】【个】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【是】【用】【词】【不】【当】【。】【比】【如】【“】【泪】【是】【一】【个】【贬】【义】【词】【,】【它】【饱】【含】【着】【人】【性】【的】【弱】【点】【”】【,】【这】【句】【话】【中】【的】【“】【贬】【义】【词】【”】【用】【得】【就】【不】【对】【,】【它】【是】【一】【个】【中】【性】【词】【。】【再】【如】【“】【当】【你】【控】【制】【住】【自】【己】【激】【动】【的】【情】【绪】【,】【你】【将】【会】【走】【出】【阴】【影】【”】【,】【这】【句】【话】【中】【的】【“】【激】【动】【”】【一】【词】【用】【得】【也】【不】【对】【,】【根】【据】【上】【文】【的】【意】【思】【,】【这】【里】【还】【是】【用】【“】【消】【极】【悲】【观】【”】【为】【宜】【,】【用】【词】【不】【当】【的】【背】【后】【是】【思】【想】【认】【识】【的】【模】【糊】【不】【清】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【语】【句】【不】【够】【连】【贯】【,】【比】【如】【“】【①】【当】【我】【遇】【到】【挫】【折】【时】【,】【我】【会】【迎】【着】【它】【,】【不】【屈】【不】【挠】【;】【②】【当】【我】【遭】【受】【失】【败】【的】【打】【击】【时】【,】【我】【会】【咬】【紧】【牙】【关】【,】【不】【让】【泪】【水】【掉】【落】【;】【③】【人】【生】【的】【道】【路】【还】【很】【坎】【坷】【,】【泪】【水】【怎】【能】【让】【我】【输】【在】【起】【跑】【线】【上】【呢】【?】【④】【当】【我】【受】【到】【伤】【痛】【的】【折】【磨】【时】【,】【我】【会】【立】【刻】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【哼】【也】【不】【哼】【一】【声】【…】【…】【”】【这】【几】【句】【中】【,】【第】【④】【句】【如】【放】【在】【第】【③】【句】【之】【前】【,】【就】【能】【和】【前】【两】【句】【构】【成】【排】【比】【。】【现】【在】【把】【第】【③】【句】【插】【在】【中】【间】【,】【就】【破】【坏】【了】【语】【句】【的】【连】【贯】【和】【流】【畅】【。】【另】【外】【,】【排】【比】【句】【要】【注】【意】【句】【式】【的】【整】【饬】【,】【才】【能】【给】【人】【以】【美】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【了】【此】【文】【,】【很】【自】【然】【地】【让】【我】【想】【起】【我】【的】【一】【位】【学】【生】【写】【的】【《】【尝】【试】【哭】【泣】【》】【一】【文】【,】【此】【文】【就】【刊】【登】【在】【本】【期】【杂】【志】【上】【,】【不】【妨】【把】【这】【两】【篇】【作】【文】【对】【照】【着】【读】【,】【也】【许】【会】【给】【你】【带】【来】【一】【点】【新】【的】【感】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【、】【2】【、】【3】【、】【4】【、】【5】【、】【6】【、】【7】【、】【8】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【波】【波】【、】【小】【米】【、】【麦】【子】【、】【娃】【娃】【、】【我】【、】【布】【丁】【、】【小】【贝】【、】【野】【丫】【丫】【,】【8】【个】【女】【生】【自】【称】【“】【乱】【室】【家】【人】【”】【—】【—】【邻】【居】【们】【管】【我】【们】【宿】【舍】【叫】【“】【疯】【人】【院】【”】【,】【我】【们】【也】【照】【单】【全】【收】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【乱】【室】【,】【乱】【也】【。】【虽】【不】【至】【于】【“】【惨】【不】【忍】【睹】【”】【,】【但】【也】【和】【“】【乱】【七】【八】【糟】【”】【有】【那】【么】【一】【拼】【…】【…】【呀】【,】【不】【好】【,】【那】【边】【7】【个】【女】【生】【瞪】【过】【来】【了】【—】【—】【“】【室】【丑】【不】【可】【外】【扬】【”】【,】【我】【怎】【么】【给】【忘】【了】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【咳】【咳】【,】【嗯】【,】【我】【还】【是】【向】【你】【介】【绍】【一】【下】【我】【们】【几】【个】【姐】【妹】【好】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【姐】【也】【疯】【狂】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【波】【波】【是】【我】【们】【宿】【舍】【的】【大】【姐】【大】【,】【为】【人】【上】【得】【厅】【堂】【,】【下】【得】【厨】【房】【,】【颇】【有】【贤】【妻】【良】【母】【风】【范】【,】【不】【过】【,】【每】【逢】【吃】【饭】【之】【际】【,】【大】【姐】【就】【会】【体】【现】【出】【她】【的】【侠】【女】【风】【采】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【段】【顺】【口】【溜】【怎】【么】【说】【来】【着】【,】【好】【像】【是】【:】【肚】【子】【饿】【空】【空】【,】【精】【神】【不】【集】【中】【。】【一】【听】【下】【课】【钟】【,】【就】【往】【食】【堂】【冲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【大】【姐】【总】【是】【一】【马】【当】【先】【,】【但】【绝】【对】【不】【是】【跑】【的】【,】【只】【不】【过】【那】【叫】【一】【个】【脚】【底】【生】【风】【,】【我】【们】【要】【用】【小】【跑】【才】【能】【跟】【得】【上】【。】【为】【什】【么】【这】【样】【快】【啊】【?】【呵】【呵】【,】【不】【知】【道】【了】【吧】【?】【她】【是】【练】【短】【跑】【的】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【来】【到】【食】【堂】【,】【大】【姐】【马】【不】【停】【蹄】【,】【以】【最】【快】【的】【速】【度】【抄】【起】【两】【三】【个】【碗】【就】【去】【打】【饭】【。】【待】【我】【们】【这】【帮】【小】【妹】【到】【的】【时】【候】【,】【也】【算】【是】【占】【尽】【“】【天】【时】【地】【利】【人】【和】【”】【—】【—】【只】【要】【接】【过】【她】【盛】【好】【的】【碗】【,】【再】【把】【空】【碗】【递】【给】【她】【,】【流】【水】【作】【业】【。】【别】【人】【还】【在】【为】【饭】【勺】【拼】【个】【你】【死】【我】【活】【的】【时】【候】【,】【餐】【桌】【周】【围】【早】【已】【坐】【满】【我】【们】【8】【个】【人】【悠】【哉】【游】【哉】【地】【开】【吃】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【不】【怎】【么】【说】【,】【跟】【着】【波】【波】【走】【,】【吃】【饭】【不】【用】【愁】【呢】【!】【嘻】【嘻】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【林】【妹】【妹】【”】【,】【不】【哭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【米】【本】【不】【姓】【林】【,】【却】【和】【林】【黛】【玉】【有】【一】【拼】【,】【动】【不】【动】【就】【“】【梨】【花】【带】【雨】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【适】【应】【封】【闭】【式】【学】【校】【的】【生】【活】【,】【想】【家】【、】【想】【爹】【妈】【了】【,】【她】【哭】【;】【成】【绩】【下】【降】【,】【被】【老】【班】【批】【评】【了】【,】【她】【哭】【;】【同】【学】【跟】【她】【闹】【着】【玩】【,】【说】【话】【重】【了】【点】【,】【她】【也】【哭】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【到】【她】【这】【样】【,】【我】【们】【又】【于】【心】【何】【忍】【?】【又】【是】【安】【慰】【,】【又】【是】【递】【纸】【巾】【的】【,】【陪】【着】【她】【,】【直】【到】【她】【不】【哭】【为】【止】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【日】【子】【久】【了】【,】【就】【看】【不】【下】【去】【了】【。】【有】【道】【是】【“】【男】【儿】【有】【泪】【不】【轻】【弹】【”】【,】【我】【们】【女】【孩】【也】【当】【自】【强】【啊】【!】【又】【没】【多】【大】【的】【事】【,】【干】【嘛】【老】【是】【哭】【哭】【啼】【啼】【的】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【我】【们】【7】【个】【从】【“】【哭】【不】【能】【解】【决】【任】【何】【问】【题】【”】【“】【女】【孩】【子】【的】【眼】【泪】【很】【珍】【贵】【”】【的】【理】【论】【到】【“】【想】【哭】【的】【时】【候】【就】【仰】【望】【天】【空】【,】【那】【样】【眼】【泪】【就】【不】【会】【流】【出】【来】【”】【的】【实】【践】【方】【法】【,】【对】【小】【米】【进】【行】【轮】【番】【的】【精】【神】【轰】【炸】【,】【目】【的】【就】【是】【“】【教】【育】【”】【她】【做】【个】【坚】【强】【乐】【观】【的】【女】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【米】【被】【我】【们】【一】【群】【人】【的】【关】【心】【,】【感】【动】【得】【眼】【圈】【儿】【红】【了】【,】【哽】【咽】【着】【答】【应】【我】【们】【以】【后】【会】【“】【管】【好】【”】【自】【己】【的】【眼】【泪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【是】【因】【了】【我】【们】【教】【导】【,】【现】【在】【的】【小】【米】【牙】【齿】【天】【天】【见】【阳】【光】【,】【再】【也】【不】【是】【那】【个】【多】【愁】【善】【感】【的】【“】【林】【妹】【妹】【”】【了】【。】【真】【的】【遇】【到】【伤】【心】【事】【,】【她】【还】【是】【会】【流】【泪】【,】【可】【我】【们】【都】【知】【道】【,】【那】【不】【意】【味】【着】【小】【米】【脆】【弱】【或】【是】【懦】【弱】【,】【人】【总】【有】【一】【种】【心】【理】【需】【要】【宣】【泄】【是】【不】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【向】【娃】【娃】【同】【学】【学】【习】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【娃】【娃】【对】【零】【食】【的】【感】【情】【很】【深】【,】【却】【怎】【么】【吃】【也】【吃】【不】【胖】【,】【苗】【条】【得】【让】【人】【嫉】【妒】【。】【这】【或】【许】【是】【因】【为】【她】【每】【天】【手】【不】【释】【卷】【,】【啃】【多】【了】【精】【神】【食】【粮】【笔】【不】【停】【耕】【的】【缘】【故】【吧】【。】【人】【家】【在】【认】【真】【的】【时】【候】【,】【她】【在】【刻】【苦】【;】【人】【家】【在】【消】【遣】【的】【时】【候】【,】【她】【在】【发】【奋】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【总】【调】【侃】【她】【:】【“】【娃】【娃】【,】【这】【又】【读】【了】【几】【斤】【的】【书】【,】【做】【了】【几】【摞】【的】【练】【习】【啊】【?】【”】【她】【先】【是】【一】【笑】【,】【而】【后】【又】【认】【真】【地】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【:】【“】【新】【学】【的】【文】【言】【文】【还】【没】【背】【熟】【,】【英】【语】【生】【词】【还】【没】【记】【住】【,】【数】【学】【练】【习】【册】【只】【做】【了】【4】【题】【,】【化】【学】【等】【会】【儿】【才】【要】【做】【呢】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【在】【感】【叹】【她】【的】【谦】【虚】【的】【同】【时】【,】【恍】【然】【大】【悟】【:】【我】【们】【没】【做】【的】【事】【情】【更】【多】【呢】【!】【然】【后】【也】【匆】【匆】【忙】【忙】【地】【投】【入】【到】【学】【习】【的】【战】【斗】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【是】【结】【尾】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【好】【,】【麦】【子】【过】【来】【了】【,】【她】【看】【到】【我】【在】【写】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【一】【定】【又】【要】【“】【逼】【”】【我】【把】【她】【塑】【造】【成】【淑】【女】【形】【象】【了】【,】【那】【个】【“】【假】【小】【子】【”】【,】【豪】【迈】【得】【就】【不】【像】【个】【女】【的】【,】【还】【淑】【女】【?】【这】【种】【忽】【悠】【群】【众】【的】【事】【,】【我】【可】【不】【能】【干】【啊】【!】【小】【贝】【、】【布】【丁】【、】【野】【丫】【丫】【的】【故】【事】【,】【只】【能】【等】【我】【找】【个】【安】【静】【的】【地】【方】【再】【告】【诉】【你】【了】【。】【至】【于】【我】【本】【人】【吗】【,】【看】【过】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【你】【多】【少】【该】【有】【些】【了】【解】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【逃】【命】【要】【紧】【,】【就】【此】【别】【过】【各】【位】【看】【官】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】整个孕期的检查【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【期】【五】【上】【午】【月】【考】【结】【束】【,】【我】【刚】【到】【家】【,】【妹】【妹】【打】【电】【话】【来】【,】【她】【哭】【了】【,】【哭】【得】【很】【伤】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【忙】【问】【她】【怎】【么】【了】【。】【她】【哭】【着】【说】【:】【“】【今】【天】【生】【活】【课】【上】【,】【老】【师】【做】【调】【查】【问】【卷】【,】【要】【求】【填】【写】【父】【母】【的】【生】【日】【和】【他】【们】【的】【喜】【好】【,】【我】【一】【项】【也】【没】【填】【上】【。】【别】【的】【小】【朋】【友】【有】【好】【多】【人】【都】【知】【道】【呢】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【笑】【了】【,】【竟】【是】【如】【此】【简】【单】【的】【问】【题】【弄】【得】【妹】【妹】【大】【哭】【一】【场】【,】【害】【得】【我】【也】【虚】【惊】【了】【一】【场】【。】【我】【安】【慰】【了】【她】【几】【句】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【下】【电】【话】【,】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【,】【我】【也】【是】【大】【致】【知】【道】【母】【亲】【的】【生】【日】【在】【三】【月】【,】【而】【具】【体】【的】【日】【期】【并】【不】【晓】【得】【。】【父】【亲】【的】【生】【日】【呢】【?】【根】【本】【不】【知】【道】【。】【不】【知】【怎】【的】【,】【我】【的】【鼻】【子】【也】【变】【得】【酸】【酸】【的】【。】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【有】【什】【么】【区】【别】【呢】【?】【做】【了】【父】【母】【1】【4】【年】【的】【女】【儿】【,】【我】【竟】【然】【连】【父】【母】【的】【生】【日】【和】【喜】【好】【都】【不】【知】【道】【!】【平】【静】【了】【一】【下】【心】【情】【,】【我】【决】【定】【去】【问】【他】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【的】【生】【日】【是】【三】【月】【份】【的】【哪】【一】【天】【?】【”】【我】【来】【到】【正】【在】【织】【毛】【衣】【的】【妈】【妈】【身】【边】【。】【也】【难】【怪】【我】【不】【知】【道】【,】【妈】【妈】【从】【未】【过】【过】【生】【日】【。】【妈】【妈】【惊】【讶】【地】【看】【着】【我】【:】【“】【你】【有】【什】【么】【事】【吗】【?】【问】【我】【生】【日】【干】【什】【么】【?】【”】【我】【说】【:】【“】【做】【女】【儿】【的】【不】【应】【该】【知】【道】【母】【亲】【的】【生】【日】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【也】【忘】【记】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【停】【下】【手】【中】【的】【活】【在】【柜】【子】【里】【翻】【了】【半】【天】【,】【好】【一】【会】【儿】【才】【找】【出】【身】【份】【证】【说】【:】【“】【3】【月】【1】【4】【日】【。】【”】【每】【年】【妈】【妈】【都】【会】【给】【我】【和】【姐】【姐】【过】【生】【日】【,】【可】【她】【自】【己】【从】【没】【过】【过】【生】【日】【,】【竟】【然】【连】【自】【己】【的】【生】【日】【都】【忘】【记】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【又】【去】【找】【父】【亲】【,】【他】【正】【在】【看】【书】【。】【他】【看】【到】【我】【,】【以】【为】【我】【有】【什】【么】【不】【懂】【的】【问】【题】【,】【便】【放】【下】【书】【。】【我】【问】【:】【“】【爸】【,】【你】【的】【生】【日】【是】【哪】【天】【?】【”】【爸】【爸】【很】【疑】【惑】【地】【看】【看】【我】【说】【:】【“】【你】【说】【什】【么】【?】【”】【我】【重】【复】【了】【一】【遍】【。】【爸】【爸】【说】【:】【“】【赶】【快】【学】【习】【去】【,】【别】【问】【些】【没】【用】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【只】【好】【去】【找】【户】【口】【本】【儿】【。】【仔】【细】【一】【看】【,】【父】【亲】【的】【生】【日】【是】【8】【月】【1】【6】【日】【。】【我】【兴】【冲】【冲】【地】【对】【父】【亲】【说】【:】【“】【我】【知】【道】【你】【的】【生】【日】【是】【哪】【天】【了】【!】【8】【月】【1】【6】【日】【!】【”】【父】【亲】【拉】【过】【我】【说】【:】【“】【户】【口】【簿】【上】【写】【的】【不】【准】【。】【”】【我】【问】【:】【“】【为】【什】【么】【?】【”】【父】【亲】【深】【情】【地】【说】【:】【“】【我】【自】【己】【都】【不】【知】【道】【。】【小】【时】【候】【家】【里】【穷】【,】【兄】【弟】【姐】【妹】【六】【个】【。】【你】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【管】【我】【们】【的】【吃】【穿】【都】【顾】【不】【过】【来】【,】【哪】【里】【还】【记】【得】【我】【们】【的】【生】【日】【?】【你】【奶】【奶】【只】【记】【得】【生】【我】【那】【年】【家】【里】【第】【一】【次】【分】【到】【了】【肉】【和】【面】【,】【吃】【了】【一】【顿】【饺】【子】【。】【那】【是】【奶】【奶】【一】【生】【中】【最】【难】【忘】【的】【饺】【子】【。】【奶】【奶】【只】【记】【得】【大】【约】【是】【刚】【过】【完】【中】【秋】【节】【生】【的】【我】【。】【上】【户】【口】【时】【就】【写】【了】【8】【月】【1】【6】【日】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【了】【父】【亲】【的】【话】【,】【我】【陷】【入】【了】【沉】【思】【:】【母】【亲】【不】【记】【得】【自】【己】【的】【生】【日】【,】【父】【亲】【的】【生】【日】【不】【准】【确】【。】【可】【他】【们】【也】【有】【生】【日】【啊】【!】【他】【们】【从】【不】【为】【自】【己】【过】【生】【日】【,】【而】【每】【年】【都】【郑】【重】【地】【给】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【过】【。】【他】【们】【的】【心】【中】【只】【有】【儿】【女】【,】【没】【有】【自】【己】【。】【这】【就】【是】【天】【下】【的】【父】【母】【心】【。】【我】【一】【定】【记】【住】【他】【们】【的】【生】【日】【,】【并】【且】【告】【诉】【给】【妹】【妹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【愿】【天】【下】【的】【儿】【女】【都】【能】【记】【住】【父】【母】【的】【生】【日】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【许】【多】【中】【学】【生】【朋】【友】【都】【记】【得】【自】【己】【的】【生】【日】【,】【而】【根】【本】【不】【知】【道】【父】【母】【的】【生】【日】【,】【像】【小】【作】【者】【一】【样】【。】【但】【小】【作】【者】【能】【够】【以】【此】【为】【素】【材】【创】【作】【文】【章】【,】【来】【启】【示】【同】【龄】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【牢】【记】【父】【母】【的】【生】【日】【,】【关】【心】【父】【母】【,】【孝】【敬】【父】【母】【。】【文】【章】【从】【生】【活】【中】【选】【材】【,】【观】【察】【细】【致】【,】【能】【够】【给】【人】【深】【刻】【的】【教】【育】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【辉】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【在】【我】【前】【行】【的】【道】【路】【上】【,】【是】【梦】【想】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【的】【召】【唤】【点】【燃】【了】【我】【内】【心】【的】【希】【望】【。】【每】【当】【攻】【克】【一】【道】【难】【关】【,】【我】【都】【感】【到】【又】【朝】【梦】【想】【的】【彼】【岸】【迈】【进】【了】【一】【步】【,】【抬】【起】【头】【,】【又】【听】【到】【了】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【声】【呼】【唤】【。】【昂】【扬】【斗】【志】【,】【出】【发】【吧】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】整个孕期的检查【<】【p】【>】【我】【不】【再】【哭】【泣】【,】【也】【不】【再】【惶】【恐】【。】【在】【漆】【黑】【的】【沃】【土】【中】【,】【我】【默】【默】【地】【积】【蓄】【着】【力】【量】【,】【也】【等】【待】【着】【那】【破】【土】【而】【出】【的】【一】【刻】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

整个孕期的检查:神话世界私服下载地址关于某些马号玩家到来说

【<】【p】【>】【我】【哈】【哈】【一】【笑】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【最】【重】【要】【的】【原】【因】【,】【是】【因】【为】【这】【里】【还】【有】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【的】【老】【师】【和】【最】【亲】【爱】【的】【老】【同】【学】【,】【我】【哪】【能】【不】【喜】【欢】【呢】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】整个孕期的检查【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【潺】【潺】【的】【溪】【水】【流】【淌】【着】【童】【年】【的】【欢】【笑】【,】【粼】【粼】【的】【水】【面】【映】【照】【着】【我】【尽】【情】【嬉】【戏】【的】【身】【影】【。】【姥】【姥】【门】【前】【的】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【呀】【,】【那】【是】【一】【个】【流】【动】【的】【C】【D】【,】【随】【时】【放】【映】【出】【我】【的】【快】【乐】【童】【年】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【感】【激】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【在】【河】【里】【捉】【鱼】【是】【我】【们】【最】【快】【乐】【的】【游】【戏】【;】【我】【感】【激】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【它】【哗】【哗】【的】【流】【水】【声】【是】【我】【们】【休】【闲】【时】【最】【轻】【松】【优】【美】【的】【音】【乐】【;】【我】【感】【激】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【它】【是】【孩】【童】【们】【口】【渴】【时】【最】【清】【甜】【的】【饮】【料】【。】【我】【感】【激】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【它】【是】【一】【台】【高】【级】【摄】【像】【机】【,】【如】【实】【地】【记】【录】【了】【我】【和】【小】【伙】【伴】【的】【每】【一】【次】【吵】【架】【,】【每】【一】【次】【和】【好】【;】【我】【感】【激】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【它】【珍】【藏】【着】【我】【童】【年】【的】【每】【一】【滴】【眼】【泪】【,】【每】【一】【个】【微】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【天】【,】【我】【们】【放】【风】【筝】【,】【累】【了】【就】【坐】【在】【小】【溪】【旁】【谈】【天】【说】【地】【;】【夏】【天】【,】【我】【们】【捉】【鱼】【虾】【,】【那】【可】【是】【天】【然】【洁】【净】【的】【大】【鱼】【缸】【;】【秋】【天】【来】【了】【,】【瑟】【瑟】【的】【秋】【风】【给】【人】【带】【来】【寒】【意】【,】【我】【们】【有】【些】【寂】【寞】【,】【有】【些】【孤】【单】【,】【就】【静】【静】【地】【看】【那】【枯】【叶】【随】【着】【溪】【水】【漂】【流】【,】【奔】【向】【远】【方】【;】【终】【于】【把】【冬】【天】【盼】【来】【了】【,】【水】【面】【结】【了】【厚】【厚】【的】【冰】【,】【姥】【爷】【给】【我】【们】【做】【了】【爬】【犁】【,】【准】【备】【了】【冰】【鞋】【,】【我】【们】【在】【冰】【上】【自】【由】【自】【在】【地】【滑】【行】【,】【像】【插】【上】【了】【翅】【膀】【。】【一】【不】【小】【心】【摔】【倒】【了】【,】【自】【己】【吃】【力】【地】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【被】【冻】【得】【红】【彤】【彤】【的】【脸】【上】【依】【然】【绽】【放】【出】【开】【心】【灿】【烂】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【童】【年】【的】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【是】【我】【生】【命】【的】【源】【泉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【童】【年】【的】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【是】【我】【快】【乐】【的】【源】【泉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【感】【激】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【我】【热】【爱】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【,】【它】【是】【我】【童】【年】【最】【清】【澈】【的】【回】【忆】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【读】【此】【文】【,】【感】【觉】【出】【小】【作】【者】【对】【童】【年】【的】【那】【条】【小】【溪】【的】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【读】【罢】【之】【后】【更】【能】【体】【会】【字】【里】【行】【间】【流】【露】【出】【的】【留】【恋】【之】【情】【。】【孩】【子】【的】【情】【感】【从】【内】【心】【流】【入】【作】【文】【,】【又】【从】【作】【文】【流】【向】【你】【我】【的】【心】【间】【。】【我】【们】【真】【的】【希】【望】【孩】【子】【情】【感】【的】【小】【溪】【,】【能】【够】【永】【远】【流】【淌】【,】【随】【生】【命】【延】【续】【。】【也】【希】【望】【每】【个】【人】【的】【心】【中】【都】【有】【那】【样】【一】【个】【溪】【水】【潺】【潺】【的】【清】【凉】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笔】【灵】【心】【慧】【,】【童】【心】【童】【趣】【的】【真】【挚】【表】【达】【,】【生】【活】【细】【节】【的】【真】【实】【描】【写】【,】【比】【喻】【的】【妙】【用】【,】【动】【静】【的】【结】【合】【均】【使】【文】【章】【可】【圈】【可】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【、】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【吴】【健】【王】【晓】【琳】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【那】【天】【,】【我】【明】【白】【了】【一】【个】【道】【理】【,】【我】【们】【不】【一】【定】【要】【做】【惊】【天】【动】【地】【的】【大】【事】【,】【学】【雷】【锋】【做】【好】【事】【其】【实】【很】【简】【单】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【有】【一】【颗】【爱】【心】【,】【时】【时】【处】【处】【都】【可】【以】【当】【好】【人】【、】【做】【好】【事】【。】【我】【们】【要】【尽】【力】【帮】【助】【别】【人】【,】【多】【关】【心】【别】【人】【,】【热】【爱】【生】【活】【,】【保】【护】【环】【境】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】整个孕期的检查【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【青】【涩】【汇】【成】【一】【条】【淡】【淡】【的】【溪】【流】【,】【静】【静】【地】【流】【淌】【在】【心】【底】【,】【在】【这】【个】【深】【秋】【的】【季】【节】【,】【我】【们】【凝】【望】【着】【彼】【此】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【桂】【花】【飘】【香】【的】【季】【节】【,】【我】【带】【着】【家】【人】【的】【期】【望】【,】【背】【着】【沉】【重】【的】【行】【李】【,】【来】【到】【这】【所】【梦】【一】【样】【的】【中】【学】【,】【高】【大】【挺】【拔】【的】【梧】【桐】【,】【红】【如】【焰】【火】【的】【枫】【叶】【,】【铺】【满】【石】【子】【的】【小】【路】【…】【…】【一】【切】【深】【深】【吸】【引】【了】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【是】【秋】【季】【,】【却】【依】【然】【残】【留】【着】【夏】【的】【气】【息】【,】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【飘】【着】【如】【纱】【般】【的】【白】【云】【,】【我】【躺】【在】【草】【地】【上】【,】【享】【受】【着】【这】【份】【惬】【意】【,】【不】【知】【过】【了】【多】【久】【。】【“】【我】【可】【以】【坐】【这】【里】【吗】【?】【”】【声】【音】【带】【点】【羞】【涩】【但】【有】【力】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【蒙】【眬】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【一】【个】【高】【高】【瘦】【瘦】【的】【男】【生】【,】【眉】【目】【清】【秀】【,】【脸】【上】【挂】【着】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【笑】【容】【,】【他】【坐】【了】【下】【来】【,】【时】【而】【望】【望】【蓝】【天】【,】【时】【而】【看】【看】【纷】【纷】【扬】【扬】【飘】【落】【的】【黄】【叶】【,】【似】【乎】【在】【沉】【思】【,】【而】【我】【,】【继】【续】【沉】【溺】【于】【自】【己】【的】【世】【界】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【学】【典】【礼】【上】【,】【校】【长】【在】【台】【上】【发】【表】【着】【长】【篇】【大】【论】【,】【我】【却】【精】【神】【溜】【号】【看】【着】【窗】【外】【的】【梧】【桐】【,】【时】【间】【节】【拍】【反】【倒】【更】【慢】【了】【,】【一】【回】【头】【便】【看】【到】【了】【那】【张】【似】【曾】【相】【识】【的】【面】【孔】【,】【依】【旧】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【坐】【在】【教】【室】【却】【又】【遇】【到】【他】【,】【并】【成】【了】【同】【桌】【,】【他】【友】【好】【地】【向】【我】【问】【好】【:】【“】【你】【好】【,】【以】【后】【请】【多】【关】【照】【。】【”】【我】【低】【头】【整】【理】【课】【桌】【,】【冰】【与】【火】【的】【对】【决】【会】【有】【什】【么】【结】【果】【呢】【?】【他】【安】【静】【地】【坐】【下】【,】【对】【他】【的】【善】【意】【我】【不】【屑】【一】【顾】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【冬】【季】【来】【临】【了】【,】【鹅】【毛】【般】【的】【大】【雪】【覆】【盖】【了】【大】【地】【的】【每】【一】【个】【角】【落】【。】【那】【晶】【莹】【剔】【透】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【树】【枝】【上】【闪】【闪】【发】【亮】【的】【冰】【晶】【,】【我】【喜】【欢】【,】【我】【的】【心】【就】【是】【一】【座】【冰】【山】【。】【和】【他】【渐】【渐】【熟】【络】【起】【来】【,】【但】【话】【依】【旧】【很】【少】【,】【他】【对】【我】【的】【评】【价】【是】【:】【冷】【酷】【,】【但】【有】【着】【一】【颗】【善】【良】【的】【心】【,】【只】【是】【隐】【藏】【得】【太】【好】【。】【我】【第】【一】【次】【笑】【了】【。】【心】【中】【投】【入】【了】【一】【束】【温】【暖】【的】【阳】【光】【,】【冰】【原】【开】【始】【融】【化】【,】【我】【慢】【慢】【接】【受】【了】【他】【的】【帮】【助】【、】【关】【心】【,】【而】【他】【也】【乐】【此】【不】【疲】【,】【最】【终】【冰】【火】【相】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【个】【人】【的】【生】【活】【似】【乎】【比】【一】【个】【人】【精】【彩】【,】【暖】【暖】【的】【阳】【光】【从】【梧】【桐】【叶】【缝】【隙】【投】【下】【一】【道】【道】【影】【子】【,】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【飘】【荡】【在】【空】【气】【中】【。】【星】【光】【璨】【璀】【的】【夜】【,】【躲】【过】【老】【师】【的】【视】【线】【,】【躺】【在】【草】【地】【上】【遥】【望】【星】【空】【,】【青】【春】【的】【朦】【胧】【让】【彼】【此】【迷】【失】【,】【青】【涩】【的】【苹】【果】【开】【始】【发】【酵】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【彼】【此】【的】【成】【绩】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【老】【师】【察】【觉】【到】【了】【我】【们】【的】【不】【同】【寻】【常】【,】【通】【知】【了】【家】【长】【…】【…】【眼】【圈】【红】【红】【的】【我】【们】【在】【走】【廊】【相】【遇】【,】【随】【后】【,】【结】【束】【了】【同】【桌】【生】【活】【,】【他】【选】【择】【了】【一】【个】【角】【落】【,】【而】【我】【,】【身】【边】【换】【了】【另】【一】【人】【。】【从】【此】【,】【他】【的】【眼】【神】【总】【是】【迷】【茫】【,】【悲】【伤】【取】【代】【了】【阳】【光】【般】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【我】【们】【的】【故】【事】【在】【此】【画】【上】【句】【号】【,】【我】【们】【之】【间】【拉】【开】【距】【离】【,】【成】【了】【两】【条】【永】【远】【无】【法】【相】【交】【的】【平】【行】【线】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【暑】【假】【结】【束】【了】【,】【又】【回】【到】【这】【个】【充】【满】【欢】【乐】【辛】【酸】【的】【校】【园】【,】【那】【份】【尘】【封】【已】【久】【的】【记】【忆】【愈】【加】【清】【晰】【,】【习】【惯】【性】【地】【往】【他】【的】【座】【位】【望】【去】【,】【一】【张】【空】【空】【的】【课】【桌】【孤】【零】【零】【地】【倚】【在】【角】【落】【里】【,】【仿】【佛】【他】【寂】【寞】【的】【影】【子】【。】【从】【他】【朋】【友】【口】【中】【得】【知】【他】【走】【了】【,】【去】【了】【另】【一】【所】【学】【校】【,】【我】【的】【心】【隐】【隐】【作】【痛】【。】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【再】【无】【联】【系】【。】【也】【许】【应】【该】【忘】【了】【他】【,】【忘】【了】【那】【段】【酸】【酸】【甜】【甜】【的】【回】【忆】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【有】【的】【过】【去】【,】【所】【有】【的】【岁】【月】【,】【所】【有】【散】【发】【着】【油】【墨】【清】【香】【的】【试】【卷】【,】【所】【有】【秋】【季】【淡】【淡】【的】【桂】【花】【香】【,】【所】【有】【溃】【烂】【在】【水】【里】【的】【落】【叶】【,】【所】【有】【随】【着】【河】【流】【漂】【远】【的】【许】【愿】【瓶】【,】【所】【有】【蓝】【天】【上】【飘】【过】【的】【云】【,】【所】【有】【的】【幸】【福】【和】【泪】【水】【…】【…】【拼】【凑】【了】【一】【段】【青】【涩】【的】【往】【事】【,】【它】【像】【只】【受】【伤】【的】【蝴】【蝶】【,】【静】【静】【地】【栖】【息】【在】【记】【忆】【最】【深】【处】【的】【花】【瓣】【上】【。】【久】【久】【,】【久】【久】【,】【我】【不】【愿】【轻】【易】【去】【触】【动】【它】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【杨】【盛】【红】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【写】【的】【是】【早】【恋】【题】【材】【。】【一】【对】【花】【季】【少】【年】【,】【如】【两】【棵】【幼】【树】【,】【本】【来】【可】【以】【在】【校】【园】【的】【沃】【土】【里】【沐】【浴】【着】【阳】【光】【雨】【露】【舒】【展】【枝】【叶】【长】【成】【栋】【梁】【之】【材】【,】【但】【由】【于】【过】【早】【地】【陷】【入】【到】【“】【早】【熟】【”】【“】【早】【恋】【”】【的】【困】【惑】【而】【结】【出】【青】【涩】【的】【果】【子】【,】【而】【且】【还】【留】【下】【了】【深】【深】【的】【心】【理】【创】【伤】【,】【这】【就】【不】【能】【不】【引】【起】【人】【们】【的】【深】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【青】【少】【年】【中】【产】【生】【朦】【胧】【的】【爱】【是】【很】【正】【常】【的】【,】【如】【果】【彼】【此】【间】【能】【很】【好】【地】【培】【育】【这】【种】【爱】【的】【禾】【苗】【,】【把】【握】【好】【分】【寸】【,】【将】【来】【可】【能】【结】【出】【硕】【果】【,】【但】【如】【果】【迷】【恋】【其】【中】【,】【进】【而】【迷】【失】【方】【向】【,】【荒】【废】【学】【业】【,】【自】【毁】【前】【程】【,】【那】【就】【铸】【成】【大】【错】【。】【青】【少】【年】【应】【有】【这】【种】【自】【我】【克】【制】【能】【力】【。】【而】【园】【丁】【亦】【有】【教】【育】【引】【导】【责】【任】【。】【在】【当】【前】【,】【各】【学】【校】【对】【青】【少】【年】【的】【青】【春】【期】【心】【理】【卫】【生】【教】【育】【亟】【待】【加】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【吕】【福】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【说】【泪】【”】【是】【一】【个】【议】【论】【文】【的】【题】【目】【,】【而】【本】【文】【的】【内】【容】【主】【要】【是】【写】【自】【己】【克】【服】【了】【爱】【流】【泪】【的】【习】【惯】【而】【变】【得】【坚】【强】【的】【事】【,】【这】【样】【,】【文】【章】【的】【标】【题】【和】【内】【容】【就】【不】【完】【全】【切】【合】【了】【。】【文】【中】【第】【四】【段】【所】【讲】【的】【就】【符】【合】【“】【说】【泪】【”】【这】【个】【题】【目】【,】【但】【从】【整】【篇】【的】【角】【度】【来】【看】【,】【它】【和】【叙】【述】【的】【事】【情】【是】【不】【协】【调】【的】【。】【这】【个】【毛】【病】【的】【产】【生】【就】【和】【文】【题】【有】【关】【系】【。】【题】【目】【还】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【好】【,】【是】【否】【可】【以】【把】【原】【题】【改】【为】【“】【我】【不】【再】【流】【泪】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【喜】【欢】【流】【泪】【到】【流】【血】【流】【汗】【也】【不】【流】【泪】【,】【思】【想】【上】【发】【生】【这】【一】【巨】【变】【,】【似】【乎】【主】【要】【是】【从】【梅】【花】【身】【上】【得】【到】【感】【悟】【而】【来】【,】【想】【学】【习】【它】【的】【坚】【强】【。】【但】【让】【人】【怀】【疑】【的】【是】【,】【就】【凭】【这】【一】【点】【,】【能】【促】【成】【这】【么】【大】【的】【转】【变】【吗】【?】【这】【里】【存】【在】【一】【个】【文】【章】【真】【实】【性】【的】【问】【题】【,】【是】【凭】【主】【观】【想】【象】【去】【写】【,】【还】【是】【从】【生】【活】【实】【际】【出】【发】【?】【是】【表】【现】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【还】【是】【矫】【情】【做】【作】【?】【这】【是】【我】【们】【在】【开】【始】【学】【习】【写】【作】【时】【不】【能】【不】【认】【真】【考】【虑】【的】【。】【对】【于】【初】【学】【写】【作】【者】【来】【说】【,】【应】【努】【力】【做】【到】【“】【以】【我】【手】【写】【我】【心】【”】【“】【表】【现】【真】【实】【的】【自】【我】【”】【。】【写】【作】【离】【不】【开】【想】【象】【,】【但】【即】【使】【想】【象】【也】【不】【能】【脱】【离】【生】【活】【的】【真】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【全】【文】【在】【逻】【辑】【上】【还】【存】【在】【问】【题】【。】【人】【的】【情】【感】【世】【界】【是】【复】【杂】【的】【,】【流】【泪】【哭】【泣】【毕】【竟】【是】【一】【种】【正】【常】【的】【情】【感】【宣】【泄】【。】【对】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【子】【来】【说】【,】【流】【泪】【未】【必】【就】【是】【软】【弱】【,】【而】【不】【流】【泪】【却】【可】【能】【是】【一】【种】【“】【伪】【坚】【强】【”】【。】【另】【外】【,】【作】【者】【喜】【欢】【梅】【花】【,】【是】【因】【为】【它】【“】【花】【瓣】【上】【没】【有】【泪】【痕】【”】【,】【那】【么】【,】【其】【他】【的】【花】【,】【诸】【如】【桃】【花】【、】【李】【花】【的】【花】【瓣】【上】【就】【有】【泪】【痕】【吗】【?】【可】【见】【这】【样】【写】【是】【不】【合】【乎】【逻】【辑】【的】【。】【如】【果】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【在】【逻】【辑】【上】【站】【不】【住】【,】【它】【便】【是】【一】【篇】【失】【败】【之】【作】【,】【就】【像】【做】【数】【学】【题】【,】【推】【理】【错】【了】【,】【这】【道】【题】【就】【做】【错】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【出】【现】【这】【些】【问】【题】【,】【也】【不】【足】【为】【奇】【,】【因】【为】【毕】【竟】【出】【自】【一】【名】【初】【一】【学】【生】【之】【手】【。】【想】【要】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【先】【要】【从】【方】【方】【面】【面】【把】【写】【的】【问】【题】【想】【清】【楚】【、】【想】【透】【彻】【,】【如】【果】【思】【想】【上】【还】【很】【模】【糊】【,】【自】【己】【都】【感】【到】【说】【不】【通】【,】【这】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【东】【西】【就】【会】【像】【是】【一】【锅】【夹】【生】【饭】【,】【让】【人】【难】【以】【下】【咽】【。】【学】【习】【写】【作】【要】【从】【提】【高】【思】【想】【认】【识】【水】【平】【、】【丰】【富】【情】【感】【世】【界】【入】【手】【。】【技】【巧】【是】【要】【学】【的】【,】【但】【并】【不】【是】【第】【一】【位】【的】【,】【千】【万】【不】【能】【本】【末】【倒】【置】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【语】【言】【上】【的】【问】【题】【主】【要】【有】【两】【个】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【是】【用】【词】【不】【当】【。】【比】【如】【“】【泪】【是】【一】【个】【贬】【义】【词】【,】【它】【饱】【含】【着】【人】【性】【的】【弱】【点】【”】【,】【这】【句】【话】【中】【的】【“】【贬】【义】【词】【”】【用】【得】【就】【不】【对】【,】【它】【是】【一】【个】【中】【性】【词】【。】【再】【如】【“】【当】【你】【控】【制】【住】【自】【己】【激】【动】【的】【情】【绪】【,】【你】【将】【会】【走】【出】【阴】【影】【”】【,】【这】【句】【话】【中】【的】【“】【激】【动】【”】【一】【词】【用】【得】【也】【不】【对】【,】【根】【据】【上】【文】【的】【意】【思】【,】【这】【里】【还】【是】【用】【“】【消】【极】【悲】【观】【”】【为】【宜】【,】【用】【词】【不】【当】【的】【背】【后】【是】【思】【想】【认】【识】【的】【模】【糊】【不】【清】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【语】【句】【不】【够】【连】【贯】【,】【比】【如】【“】【①】【当】【我】【遇】【到】【挫】【折】【时】【,】【我】【会】【迎】【着】【它】【,】【不】【屈】【不】【挠】【;】【②】【当】【我】【遭】【受】【失】【败】【的】【打】【击】【时】【,】【我】【会】【咬】【紧】【牙】【关】【,】【不】【让】【泪】【水】【掉】【落】【;】【③】【人】【生】【的】【道】【路】【还】【很】【坎】【坷】【,】【泪】【水】【怎】【能】【让】【我】【输】【在】【起】【跑】【线】【上】【呢】【?】【④】【当】【我】【受】【到】【伤】【痛】【的】【折】【磨】【时】【,】【我】【会】【立】【刻】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【哼】【也】【不】【哼】【一】【声】【…】【…】【”】【这】【几】【句】【中】【,】【第】【④】【句】【如】【放】【在】【第】【③】【句】【之】【前】【,】【就】【能】【和】【前】【两】【句】【构】【成】【排】【比】【。】【现】【在】【把】【第】【③】【句】【插】【在】【中】【间】【,】【就】【破】【坏】【了】【语】【句】【的】【连】【贯】【和】【流】【畅】【。】【另】【外】【,】【排】【比】【句】【要】【注】【意】【句】【式】【的】【整】【饬】【,】【才】【能】【给】【人】【以】【美】【感】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【了】【此】【文】【,】【很】【自】【然】【地】【让】【我】【想】【起】【我】【的】【一】【位】【学】【生】【写】【的】【《】【尝】【试】【哭】【泣】【》】【一】【文】【,】【此】【文】【就】【刊】【登】【在】【本】【期】【杂】【志】【上】【,】【不】【妨】【把】【这】【两】【篇】【作】【文】【对】【照】【着】【读】【,】【也】【许】【会】【给】【你】【带】【来】【一】【点】【新】【的】【感】【受】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】整个孕期的检查【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晨】【曦】【微】【露】【,】【雾】【气】【迷】【蒙】【。】【我】【踏】【上】【了】【离】【乡】【的】【汽】【车】【,】【与】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【故】【乡】【,】【与】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【朋】【友】【告】【别】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【朋】【友】【是】【一】【只】【如】【同】【黑】【绒】【球】【的】【小】【狗】【。】【记】【得】【刚】【抱】【来】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【比】【我】【的】【拳】【头】【大】【不】【了】【多】【少】【,】【胖】【胖】【的】【,】【圆】【圆】【的】【,】【黑】【黑】【的】【。】【它】【的】【眼】【睛】【如】【同】【两】【颗】【小】【黑】【豆】【,】【它】【小】【小】【的】【鼻】【子】【总】【是】【贴】【着】【地】【面】【嗅】【来】【嗅】【去】【。】【由】【于】【还】【没】【有】【断】【奶】【,】【它】【常】【常】【东】【寻】【西】【找】【,】【嘴】【里】【还】【发】【出】【哽】【哽】【的】【声】【音】【,】【它】【是】【在】【找】【它】【的】【妈】【妈】【呀】【!】【我】【心】【酸】【了】【,】【它】【这】【么】【小】【就】【见】【不】【到】【妈】【妈】【了】【,】【多】【可】【怜】【呀】【!】【于】【是】【,】【我】【就】【担】【当】【起】【它】【妈】【妈】【的】【角】【色】【。】【我】【把】【它】【紧】【紧】【地】【裹】【在】【怀】【里】【,】【它】【享】【受】【着】【我】【的】【体】【温】【,】【香】【香】【地】【睡】【着】【了】【。】【它】【常】【常】【用】【舌】【头】【轻】【轻】【地】【舔】【我】【的】【手】【,】【我】【知】【道】【它】【饿】【了】【,】【就】【拿】【牛】【奶】【给】【它】【喝】【。】【把】【牛】【奶】【装】【进】【奶】【瓶】【里】【,】【插】【进】【吸】【管】【,】【让】【小】【狗】【慢】【慢】【地】【吸】【吮】【到】【嘴】【里】【去】【。】【我】【成】【了】【它】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【它】【成】【了】【我】【可】【爱】【的】【婴】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【它】【渐】【渐】【地】【长】【大】【了】【,】【竟】【然】【可】【以】【每】【天】【跟】【我】【去】【上】【学】【了】【。】【记】【得】【一】【天】【早】【晨】【,】【我】【背】【着】【书】【包】【上】【学】【去】【。】【走】【着】【走】【着】【,】【听】【到】【身】【后】【有】【轻】【微】【的】【声】【音】【,】【转】【身】【一】【看】【竟】【然】【是】【它】【。】【只】【见】【它】【胖】【乎】【乎】【的】【身】【子】【晃】【来】【晃】【去】【,】【短】【短】【的】【小】【尾】【巴】【左】【右】【摇】【摆】【,】【太】【可】【爱】【了】【。】【但】【我】【还】【是】【装】【出】【生】【气】【的】【样】【子】【吆】【喝】【它】【回】【家】【。】【它】【见】【我】【生】【气】【的】【样】【子】【,】【便】【怯】【生】【生】【地】【往】【回】【跑】【,】【但】【我】【刚】【走】【了】【几】【步】【,】【它】【又】【跟】【上】【来】【了】【,】【弄】【得】【我】【哭】【笑】【不】【得】【。】【上】【课】【时】【间】【快】【到】【了】【,】【只】【得】【随】【它】【的】【便】【,】【跟】【在】【后】【面】【吧】【。】【就】【这】【样】【,】【我】【在】【教】【室】【里】【上】【课】【,】【它】【就】【在】【室】【外】【蹲】【守】【;】【我】【下】【课】【了】【,】【它】【就】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【尽】【情】【地】【与】【我】【亲】【近】【。】【舔】【舔】【我】【的】【手】【,】【咬】【咬】【我】【的】【裤】【脚】【,】【把】【头】【伸】【进】【我】【的】【怀】【里】【使】【劲】【地】【蹭】【蹭】【,】【还】【哽】【哽】【地】【撒】【娇】【。】【它】【好】【像】【也】【懂】【学】【校】【的】【规】【矩】【似】【的】【,】【从】【不】【影】【响】【同】【学】【们】【上】【课】【。】【只】【要】【上】【课】【铃】【一】【响】【,】【它】【就】【蹲】【到】【门】【外】【去】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【次】【,】【同】【学】【们】【把】【我】【藏】【在】【门】【后】【,】【又】【把】【我】【围】【个】【水】【泄】【不】【通】【。】【可】【小】【狗】【一】【进】【门】【就】【直】【奔】【门】【后】【使】【劲】【,】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【汪】【汪】【叫】【。】【弄】【得】【同】【学】【们】【哄】【堂】【大】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【小】【狗】【已】【经】【成】【为】【我】【生】【活】【中】【的】【不】【可】【缺】【少】【的】【一】【部】【分】【,】【它】【是】【我】【形】【影】【不】【离】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【我】【要】【随】【父】【母】【搬】【家】【到】【城】【里】【去】【了】【,】【我】【的】【老】【屋】【,】【我】【的】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【都】【将】【与】【我】【告】【别】【,】【就】【连】【我】【那】【条】【可】【爱】【的】【小】【狗】【也】【得】【放】【在】【别】【人】【家】【了】【。】【我】【可】【以】【割】【舍】【一】【切】【,】【我】【唯】【独】【不】【能】【割】【舍】【的】【就】【是】【我】【的】【这】【位】【忠】【诚】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【我】【多】【次】【请】【求】【妈】【妈】【带】【上】【它】【,】【妈】【妈】【那】【不】【容】【分】【说】【的】【答】【复】【总】【是】【令】【我】【伤】【心】【欲】【绝】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【富】【丽】【堂】【皇】【的】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【里】【怎】【能】【有】【这】【样】【一】【条】【普】【通】【狗】【的】【安】【身】【之】【所】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【汽】【车】【开】【动】【了】【,】【我】【可】【爱】【的】【朋】【友】【随】【着】【车】【轮】【在】【狂】【奔】【,】【我】【的】【泪】【眼】【终】【于】【看】【不】【见】【它】【了】【。】【再】【见】【了】【,】【我】【的】【故】【乡】【!】【再】【见】【了】【,】【我】【的】【朋】【友】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【不】【知】【它】【现】【在】【还】【好】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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